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Sean Thomas McDonnell's avatar

I can't believe you created this in one day! And the narration was on point. ✨

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A. R. Eldridge's avatar

Thank you Shaun! Yeah it was just bubbling up and I had to let it out. Really appreciate the kind words about the narration: I talk a big game but I’m actually a bit self conscious about it so cheers!

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Bryan Wiler's avatar

A story that grabs you and doesn’t let go. Excellent stuff.

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A. R. Eldridge's avatar

Thanks Brian! I was really going for that edge of your seat terror so I'm glad it comes across!

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EJ Trask's avatar

great pacing, totally chilling 😉 world you’ve built. well done

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A. R. Eldridge's avatar

Thank you so much, glad you liked it!

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Wendy Cockcroft's avatar

Brilliant! I love it!

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A. R. Eldridge's avatar

Thanks Wendy! 🙏

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The Ear Implant Foundation's avatar

An exciting suspense story with an imaginative sci-fi setting.

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